The Official Writing Challenge
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Love the story told from the child's POV. Great writing on topic.
Loved the child's point of view. Well written.
The dialouge in here is priceless! I love the MC's Voice and especially how he would ride his bike around. What a neat story! ^_^
11/06/07
Great "voice." Enjoyed the story. Well done.
11/07/07
Great job of drawing us into the story.