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11/25/06
A lovely story, and very touching. A sign of a good writer is when the reader gets out the kleenex. I did. Well written too. God Bless.
11/27/06
One can read into this the importance of family and family love. You have conveyed this in the dialogue and the emotions from your characters. Well done.
11/29/06
What a sweet momma. If only all strained relationships could be healed like that. I like the complex character of the father.
11/29/06
I liked the way the story gradually unfolded. This was written in such a way that it gives the reader a real glimpse into this family's life. Very sweet and well done.
12/05/06
Thank you for sharing this precious story of family life with us. It shows all the love in your heart. God bless.