The Official Writing Challenge
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03/08/05
WILL it work? I hope so. I could see the richness of the office and picture the brothers both physically and emotionally. Great writing!
It had the feel of English writing and with the introduction of the Barrister, i had to smile. Wouldn't it be great if we someday got a second chapter of this somewhere?!
03/11/05
Haha, justice is served, although I hate to see that wonderful missionary couple have to put up with him for a whole year!
03/11/05
I love this, especially with the twist at the end where Geoffrey has to accompany his brother for a year to see the work he's doing. Fine writing.
03/11/05
Oh, this is very good, very good, indeed! :-) You said it all without using the the "F" word once. (Huh? I was reffering to Favoritism, what did you think I meant? ;-)) Great job! - Nancy
03/13/05
Great job. Very enjoyable reading.

Keep up the great story telling.

Kathy
Oh, I LOVE this, Linda. I'm just sitting here, grinning over the set up. Awesome!
03/14/05
Congratulations dear Linda. As Nancy put it, you made the point beautifully without literally saying "favor" or "favoritism once. Very good writing dear friend. Love, Deb
03/15/05
I loved this! Congratulations on the win!