The Official Writing Challenge
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01/17/05
Great retelling and new,fresh perspective.
01/17/05
Beautifully descriptive.
01/17/05
Beautiful Keep writing !
01/18/05
Wow ... your use of the English language is magnificent.
01/18/05
I hope you know you are a genius!Very beautiful and awesome... Keep winning and shining for Jesus.
01/18/05
He is Awesome and Mighty, too wonderful to comprehend, yet you seem to describe it so that we can see it and catch it.
Wow! This was so beautiful and such a wonderful blessing.
This is fantastic, You are a great storyteller, It is well written, very descriptive with great word pictures which paint a vivid scene and tell an old story in a new way. Keep writing for the Lord.
Astonishingly beautiful. I feel I need to read it over again slowly and let all the magnificent images penetrate my always too hurried mind. Thank you! I'm blessed to have read this.
01/20/05
Terrific writing. Great choice of word descriptions and flow. Loved it!
01/21/05
That excited me as I read it! I just didn't want it to end. There was so much going on and the whole things was filled with joy and pleasure. Perfect!
My spirit leapt for joy as I know the Word must also have been hardly able to contain His own joy at the sight of His creations. Beautiful... I can just see the earth springing forth into life.
Great, creative writing. Very well done. God bless you.
it felt that i'm reading some novels, or pocketbooks. really so good.
01/23/05
simply beautiful
01/24/05
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01/24/05
What beautiful imagery and poetry and visions! Thank you and bless you!
01/24/05
Well Petra, it is lovely to put the name to the writing. Beautiful piece of writing and absolutely spot on for theme. Congratulations on your 2nd place in the Advanced Level Challenge and 4th place in the Editor's Choice Challenge - well deserved. Make sure you get your release signed and into FaithWriters so your story can be included in the next Anthology. Congratulations again. With love, Deb (Challenge Co-ordinator)
01/27/05
Petra ~ You're a poetic, talented writer. Beautiful imagery. Congrats on your placement! Joanne
Oh Petra,your Anointed writing takes us into the realm of almost witnessing God's Creation taking place with your creative descriptive beautiful words. You are a very Gifted writer. God Bless you and Your Family Always,
In His Love,Dee:)
"Numbers 6:24,25,26"
05/06/05
Wow, Suzanne said I should read this. Thanks for making that moment of creation so wonderful yet forcasting that other moment of destruction. You're a very creative and imaginative writer. Thanks for submitting this.
05/10/05
Wow! How amazingly you've put to words the creation story! Thank you for the inspiring read.
12/02/05
WoWOWOWOW!i!i!I!
This was AMAZING! Honestly, I don't remember ever reading a mroe breathtaking version of the beauty of creation. This makes it so exciting, so beautiful, so magnifecant! I'll be sure to read this more times to take it all in. You've used really vivid imagery. May your well-developed talent continue growing!
~Crystal~