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Great story, and great point!
06/02/06
Great witness piece. Great encouragement.
06/03/06
Seeds planted by children can later become a solid foundation. I like the flow of this and it reads well with a conversation that could easily happen with children "Let's go back to Barbie's." Well done.
Well done! What a wonderful picture of grace...upon both girls. You kept me intrigued the whole way through, and your wrap-up was terrific!
06/06/06
What a wonderful scene you set. You do a great job of showing us how Jesus can use anyone or any circumstance to call someone to him. When I work with training people to witness to others, I often tell them to not worry, they are not responsible for saving anybody; Jesus does that. We just need to be there and available so he can use us, if he desires, to accomplish the task. Even the smallest seed they plant may someday, far, far down the road, be harvested. I need to have them read this story and see how such a little thing as a picture in a book can have such a far-reaching impact. Thank you so much for sharing this story.