The Official Writing Challenge
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I think it would have been easier, if you wanted all the thoughts separate to have it in lines, like prose or poetry. Your passion came through about this.
Good message. I hope you consider formatting your entry a bit differently next time. Makes it difficult to read this way, and it's a shame because you have a lot of thought-provoking things to say. God bless.