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This is very tender and well-written. I was especially moved that she prayed for Louie's children; that took an extra measure of grace.
I have seen this story played out alot in my visits to nursing homes.

Good encouragement for us all to reachout and in beyond the skin to the heart. Thanks for the good story.

A story that touches the heart. Good one!
A sweet story with a strong message of forgiveness and of how we are God's hands in this earth. I liked it! Kate~
I just took another look at this story, as I was searching for pieces to use in the Front Page Showcase. Watch for it on the week of June 25. Thanks for this touching story, Joyce!
I believe my favorite part is when she used the Word of God to touch a heart that needed just...The Love of God!
It is... it's sad. Don't write an article to depress people again. Paul wouldn't.

Good writing.
This is a wonderful story -- so touching. I've seen it too -- how many just give up living -- why go on if nobody cares. I loved your nurse and the compassion she showed. Great job!
You have done a wonderful job touching us with this heartfelt story. Keep writing for Him!