The Official Writing Challenge
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02/21/06
Ah, this is a humourous little journal entry! You don't need the info line "Moses’ diary entry: First day with Pharaoh". That came across in the body of the piece. I loved this line: "with yours truly as chief executive imbecile". Funny!
02/22/06
Yup, hit him over the head with it - that'll learn him! Well done.
02/23/06
How funny! I like your take on the story.

02/24/06
I like the humorous vein you put into this story. It went down very well.