The Official Writing Challenge
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05/02/26
Touching story told in an interesting sitting!
I really enjoyed this. You pulled me in immediately and kept my attention to the last word. I really liked your message and the take on the topic was great.
Congratulations on placing 2nd in Advanced.

A wonderful story with great atmosphere.

I'll look forward to seeing your work in the Masters category before long.
I just took a look at your Challenge history. You were already in Masters. Well, get back up there! :-)
05/07/26
Congratulations on placing 2nd place in your division and 6th place overall! You have a real gift of storytelling.
Congratulations on your 2nd Place in your level and 6th overall! Happy Dance!
05/07/26
You have such a way with words and I loved how you weaved a father’s love for his daughter throughout the story and I also learned a lot about the culture of area where the daughter grew up.

Great job and well deserved EC entry.
07/14/26
Loved this story! What a wise man to go against the grain of societal values raising a daughter by himself and teaching her trade. That woman deserves the very best kind of husband like her father.