The Official Writing Challenge
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You did a nice job of retelling this story. You painted a picture for the reader. Instead of using exclamation points, let your word choice do your exclaiming. You did write on topic and delivered a clear message. If you'd like more feedback on your entry, go to FW group on Facebook and look for the post, Drop a Hint, or the forums and leave a hint about your title.
06/19/25
I enjoyed your depictions of the physical armor used in the physical battle then and your encouragement from the Word to take up and put on, our spiritual armor to defeat the attacks of our enemy.
Congratualations on your win.