The Official Writing Challenge
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01/30/25
This story is well-told. Very readable except for the lack of either indentation or space between paragraphs. An easy fix:-).
01/30/25
The formatting was a little disturbing but I enjoyed reading your story and can relate to fear of fat!
01/30/25
Prayers for a successful journey to wholeness.