The Official Writing Challenge
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Date
03/06/24
You have challenged us to apply this parable to our own lives. There were a few glitches that could be cleared up to make it even better. “Bowels were full” would be more meaningful with an explanation of what that means. You used the words ‘might have by passed’ for the first priest, when he actually did pass by. The paragraph describing the Samaritans was a little choppy, and also the sentence describing the ‘command of Jesus’ would be more clear if there were commas.
Keep sharing Jesus!