The Official Writing Challenge
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02/13/23
A horrible tragedy, indeed!
02/14/23
Wow, I did not hear about this. How awful!
Powerful story. Well written.
A lot of people like a mystery. A few details how they concluded which brand would help make it a mystery, and that it wasn't done on purpose. I wondered at the start if it was medieval times. "Minster of Health" and a brand of flour were clues to modern time. WWII maybe? More recent? I couldn't find a clue as to where it took place.
Good job. Keep writing.
02/15/23
This story was quite interesting was it based on a real account.

This was an interesting take on the topic. I don't know if I would have put mourning morning because it was kind of confusing.

Since mourning was central to our topic. I like something like when morning dawned.

Thank you for sharing.
02/16/23
You did a great job retelling the story of this tragic occurrence.
God Bless~