The Official Writing Challenge
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08/03/22
I have read this young lady's story before on the internet. This is beautifully written. My suggestion would be less telling and more showing. Focus on the emotion of her abandonment, her struggles and her achievements. Especially develop how her true value comes from being part of God's Kingdom and not merely on her physical achievements. Show how God uses her BECAUSE of her uniqueness.
08/04/22
Sounds like a biography. Nice story.
08/04/22
Well done and well said!
Congrats,
Blessings~