The Official Writing Challenge
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05/08/22
Poor Vashti is overshadowed, overlooked whenever the book of Esther is read. Yet here you are, bringing her dilemma to our attention. Some say Xerxes wanted her to come and dance naked in front of all those men, so she refused. Whether that is true or not, she made her choice. And had to live with the consequences.
Thank you for getting into Vashti's head with your prose. I enjoyed this piece immensely.
05/09/22
Wow, this was different. An excellent job with the subject matter, and an interesting entry with real depth of emotions from both King and Queen. I don't think I've ever seen anyone bring "Vashti" to life in such a way.

Well done,

God Bless~
05/12/22
I am so glad you won with this prose. Coongratulations!