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12/16/21
A great Bible study piece and well written.

Keep writing.
12/17/21
I agree with the previous comment. This would make a good bible study piece. For me the first paragraph, had to many questions. I believe if you had worked them in throughout the entire piece would have been a better approach. Thank you and keep writing.
Priorities of God and His kingdom in our lives is so fundamental. And the tendency to give in to temptation and make our gifts into idols, can truely be a subtle sin. You have shown us this through good scriptural and personal support. Great way to effectively teach through example! Good flow. Logically presented. Leaving us with a thankfulness for correction is great!
I loved this piece.
I so agree that self interest and congratulations can easily be at an any intersection on our journey, We are having so much reward and delight in the gift. I think He loves our delight but I agree our ‘first’ must undoubtedly be in Him, of Him and for Him.
Again, I loved it.
The intro. may have been a little didactic - but only a touch :).