The Official Writing Challenge
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12/16/21
You made many excellent points in this article. The mind is indeed so key to peace. I loved the closing paragraph. Great job.
12/16/21
Congrats on taking second place… Very insightful peace… vivid descriptors…. Great job!
I like your hook...a literal storm. Then you developed the piece into informative insights. Good scripture references for support. Active word choice..."pounding your desk" etc.

Would this classify as nonfiction? As it's genre?

Only consideration would be focus ...you have about 3 strong directions/subjects. 1.Mind/ peace, 2.closeness to God/ peace, 3. and unity in Christ.