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Topic: PATIENT (11/25/21)
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TITLE: Steps into a Larger Life | Previous Challenge Entry
By Evelyn Sprouse Rowe
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Life has some waiting
In it's game;
'Stanced' in time and space.
'Played'
Through patient
waiting,
When stillness needs
It's time,
and gives
time
and space;
a place.
Cuz that place
Is carving
a part of you;
into a bigger you
To Embark upon
A wider more open space;
Creating life
into
the product of
It's perfect work.
"Patience will
have her perfect work",
By standing in its place
Provided as a step;
Important,
As every step;
That builds a life;
Enlarged
To accommodate,
A great
Full and
Peace-filled
Destiny.
Living, healed
And whole
Content and bold
achieved
by participating in;
A PATIENT STEP
and stance
taken in;
the times,
Places
and spaces
of our lives.
This patient warrior
won in waits,
stands,
plays,
and steps.
Building us
into a life
larger fuller.
Rendering us
Alive whole and eternal.
A curtain
Rises
Our ends step
Into the beginning
Life is large
We're playing
on the big screen
This process
built it
One patient
Step at a time.
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I've been searching my memory, trying to find the right literary term for the form. Free verse, but its form on the page? It’s beautiful.
It has been about thirty years since the tutor touched on it, so unless someone tells me- I'll wait patiently until I step into that ‘larger life’ ðŸ˜
I've been searching my memory, trying to find the right literary term for the form. Free verse, but its form on the page? It’s beautiful.
It has been about thirty years since the tutor touched on it, so unless someone tells me- I'll wait patiently until I step into that ‘larger life’ ðŸ˜
Quite nice but the form and body of the piece loaded with the ''topic'' [mentioned six times] is intriguing.