The Official Writing Challenge
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"When Abraham laid his son on the altar, he was accepting without question God’s collar." Thanks for the reminder. This was very well written, it made me think.
Very good analogy. I enjoyed it.
02/09/06
At first, the idea of a "Christian collar" was somewhat disturbing, but for all that, you got it right. I might suggest that you find a way to connect a little more effectively the missionary interlude to the Abraham example. It's a little bit of a leap for me. But this was very good.
02/10/06
I think the two men speaking of the man and his wife more typified the first two ladies who couldn't comprehend the ways of the Master, or the man sent from God (missionary). I really liked this message. I picked it up because of the title. I have 3 dogs and had a feeling this would be good. I wasn't disappointed. God bless ya, littlelight
02/10/06
Wonderful, well-written and full of truth!
Good analogy - something most of us wouldn't think about!
You used a very good analogy, but the transitions from dog collar analogy to the missionary story to the example of Abraham could have flowed a little better. You did get your point across though. I enjoyed reading it.