The Official Writing Challenge
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08/28/21
Beautiful!
Blessings~
This is a great retelling. My biggest advice would be to try and avoid using the topic word so much. Instead show the topic instead of inserting the word. It flowed nicely and the message is really profound. Congratulations on ranking 4th in your level and 14 overall. The highest rankings can be found on the message boards.