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04/24/21
I am with you on the disclaimers on medicine and food; a world of risk we life in.
I noticed you are in the Advanced group, but in second paragraph, fifth line, no capital letter after full stop.

"But take heart, what is false must have its opposite in truth." Thank you for this sentence, I tend to forget that.

Good article, keep writing.
I remember taking a college course about advertising, and it shocked me the many ways companies persuade consumers. Some do use outright lies, while others deliver a more subliminal message. Although, I do disagree with your point about the COVID information (as a nurse, I know the devastation it has caused and have seen it decimate families and friends.) While we do not know everything about it, the warnings, for the most part, are meant for people to do an honest research, look at it from all sides, pray and ask God for wisdom. I think one of the problems is people only research one side of a product or idea. God gave us wisdom and the ability to figure out what he wants us to do. It's nice that the Bible wasn't meant to trick us. There are horrible things in this world, but God will give us strength to overcome. I like that you give many different examples. Don't be afraid to mix up sentences structure and use descriptive language to paint a picture for your reader.
04/28/21
I too hate commercials with those disclaimers that negate all the supposed positive benefits. My suggestion is that you may have two articles here. Take out the COVID portion. I think it's strong to talk about disclaimers and then God's truth and there being no disclaimer on the Bible. If you want to write an article on COVID, have that separate with more supporting information. Good article.