The Official Writing Challenge
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You have an enjoyable writing style and you maintained my interest to the end :)
01/16/21
Good article. I feel, however, that you don't tell what the nemesis is. If you were less vague, you could possibly relate to others who are struggling in the same way.

Also, "enough" is not strongly connected to this article.
01/21/21
I enjoyed your entry, but I didn’t see where you showed it was enough. I believe you insinuated it with the scriptures you quoted, but did not actually hit the mark.
Keep on writing and well done.