The Official Writing Challenge
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11/27/20
He sounds like a precious man!
12/01/20
This was an interesting read. I find that it is sometimes hard to help the needy because you don't know if you are supporting a bad habit by helping them. Hope you get a good score.
This is a lovely timely message for today's world. It's so easy to just think of ourselves, but by teaching kids the wonderful gift of volunteering and giving, hopefully the next generation will always remember these lessons.
12/02/20
This was a hugely enjoyable read. My only suggestion is to not overwork the theme word. Readers get it without constant reminders! Thanks for a lovely story.