The Official Writing Challenge
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08/06/20
The title of your poem and your approach to the topic, I would say, is unique. Very unique.
The first few lines looked clumped up. But I enjoyed the latter part!
I enjoyed your unique take on the topic. Nicely done.
08/07/20
That is a very creative take on the topic!
08/07/20
Your poem is well composed. Thank you.
08/07/20
Good job of pulling out the colors of the Bible. I think it would have been easier for me to read if there had been spaces between every so many lines.
08/07/20
This was very colorful indeed, but a little hard to follow. If you could have provided spaces between every 2-3 lines, that would be helpful.
08/10/20
Love the 'painting' you have written with the Bible. Good work.