The Official Writing Challenge
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03/07/20
God analogy. I'd rather be famous in God's eyes for sure! This entry would have been easier for my senior eyes to read had you double or triple-spaced the paragraphs. Seeing the white space makes it more pleasing to the eye. Keep up the good work!
03/09/20
We are both trying to become more readable writers. When reading this entry I see a mistake we make. Giving too much information than is relevent to the flow of the story. I believe your point (and it's a good point!) about living up to a name--especially if we bear the name of Christian--would be stronger if you stuck to Alexander and Christ and omitted the beginning and ending paragraphs and points. Less is more. If only I could remember that!