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Topic: ALL TALK, NO ACTION (01/10/19)
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TITLE: Promise Keepers | Previous Challenge Entry
By Caleb Cheong
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failed promises and broken people
we seek to love the broken people
but to live in broken promises
and covenants are much harder
All talk, no action
may be the vocabulary
of some but not Peter and John
in their encounter
with the limb man
Silver and gold have I none
But what I do have
I give you
In the name of Jesus
rise up and walk
The healed man
went walking
and praising
walking his talk
talking his walk
That should be the case
for much is expected
from whom much has been given
we have received the message
so live the life and belief
In the world
we may find talk
and no action
but in God’s kingdom
there’s talk and action
Jesus came to fulfil
the Father’s promise to
seek and find the lost
He gave His life
to ransoms us all
Are we not glad
that our God who not just talks
but also acts
faithfully carrying out
His perfect will
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Here is a section that could use a couple of tweaks:
"seek and find (Save would be a better word than find) the lost
He gave His life
to ransom(s) us all"
(the "s" should not be there.)
Thank you for reminding us that God is the only One we can always count on. May he bless you as you write for Him.
Lovely...thank you!
God Bless~