The Official Writing Challenge
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Outstanding. I thoroughly enjoyed this story and the fitting ending. It's a winner, I think.
A very well thought out and well written "short" story. You might have added more but I think it might have destroyed the effect it has in this length.
12/13/17
Awww...sweet and touching story. well done.
Blessings~
12/14/17
Congratulations on your 1st place finish in the Advanced category, LeslieJean.

I never expected the ending.