The Official Writing Challenge
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You have some interesting facts in this piece. I'd encourage you to expand a bit more on it and share why it was important to you and the feelings you had while there. Take me there with your words. It started and ended as a personal memoir, but the middle felt more like a history or Bible lesson. I was aching to see more of you in it as I read. I could tell the Holy Spirit prompted you to visit these places for a great reason and I feel the more you write the more you will share those reasons and maybe even realize them yourself. Don't stop. I look forward to reading more of your works and believe God has a special purpose for your stories.
01/28/17
I agree that sharing your personal experiences & connection would add more interest to the middle of your article. Make me feel like I'm standing there with you. Your writing style is very clean and focused, which I personally like a lot. Tell us more...
Thank you for the insights into your biblical travels. It was interesting.
We had the privilege of going to Israel with a seminary group a couple of years ago. It sure changed the way we read the Bible and see history.
02/02/17
Thank you for this interesting entry which I enjoyed very much.

Blessings~