The Official Writing Challenge
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This is a nice devotion. I like the Bible verses you picked, but most of your piece was Bible verses. I'd love you to expand on it more. Maybe show some examples from your own life to make it more relatable and personal. Although you nentioned dream in the end, very little of the actual piece seemed on topic to me. You're right that being a Christian may not always be easy, but it is so worth it. Keep writing and listening to the Spirit's calling.