The Official Writing Challenge
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07/29/16
What an inspiring approach for evangelism. Your points are clear and make great sense. This is very good.
08/01/16
An interesting story. Early in the story, you mentioned seven spiritual truths. It would have been helpful to number them, or bold them (html coding is before bold type and when the bold needs to stop type

Your summary had six bullet points making me wonder if you meant six or seven spiritual truths.

This sentence near the end confused me. Perhaps it's the wording. I'm sure if you reworked it, you'd find less words to convey your message. Here's the sentence you wrote.

"Then what is there left but for us to be the answer to their expectations and present the final case with the truth that they already intrinsically know."

It is obvious you put a lot of time, and effort, into this story. Nice job.
08/01/16
Ok, the html coding took my examples and applied them to my comments. Let me restate using the html commands in parenthesis.

To start bold, type ""
To end bold, type "
"

Hope this helps. As you can see from my previous comments, some of the text is bolded. This is what I am trying to convey. You could have numbered each spiritual truth, and bold the wording of it.
08/01/16
Well this system is just too smart. Even in parenthesis, it applied the commands.

Let me try another way.

To start bold, type the < carrot the with no added space, type the letter b, then close the command with a > carrot.

Hope this example works just ignore the spacing


To end the bold, you would add a diagonal slash after the < carrot - to look like this carrot.

Here is an example, again just ignore the spacing
08/01/16
Seriously, this is frustrating. I apologize for the multiple comments. Once I know who you are, I will send a private message with the start and end commands for bold.
08/02/16
I thought this was good but am not real sure how well it fits the topic.Maybe it's just me.
08/02/16
I thought this was good but am not real sure how well it fits the topic.Maybe it's just me.
08/04/16
Very informative and a wonderful outreach lesson! Speaking about your Mom...My Mom also passed away in her eighties, and was a strong believer. She often told me she was not afraid of dying, but was just afraid of "how" she would die. Good job!