The Official Writing Challenge
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06/16/16
I love stories about friendships, and this was a good one. I'm glad sara was there for Cassie. God bless.
06/21/16
I appreciated one friend consoling the other about the winter season of her Christian walk. This is a comforting story many Christians need to hear. Well done.
A heartwarming story of true friendship. I love how Jesus is such a huge a part of these young girls' lives. The dialog doesn't sound natural, though, especially for teenagers. For example, people use contractions when speaking, - it's instead of it is, and we're instead of we are.

Your writing skills are excellent, and I encourage you to study the craft and keep writing. A great resource for free writing lessons, advice, and feedback is http://www.faithwriters.com/Boards/phpBB2/viewforum.php

You have talent, and I hope to see more of your writing!