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06/10/16
Sounds pretty bad. I think there are some punctuation errors, or should I say lack of punctuation that should be there. Also Christian principals should be principles. Interesting story.
06/14/16
I'm curious as to whether this is a true story because I've seen those 'Wicked' campervans with their offensive slogans. If it is it makes it especially interesting to know more about the owner of that company. If not true I suggest that you'd be better using a fictional company name. You've taken a creative approach to this topic. Well done.
This is quite interesting. I've never heard of Wicked Campers before. I can't imagine what I would think if I saw one. The fact that your brother owns the company surprised me. I have a feeling that he isn't insouciant at all, but has something deep troubling his heart. I stopped and said a prayer for you, him, and your families. Prayer is not the least we can do, but the most. I've been reminded of that once this week already. The Holy Spirit is definitely trying to drill that message into my heart.