The Official Writing Challenge
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06/06/16
I love Pilgrim's Progress and how you showed the similarity between David and Christian. However, when you threw in Paul at the end, it seems you added more to the mix than necessary. Sometimes, simpler is better. Just my opinion. Nice work.
You make some great points and I enjoyed the verses you used to reinforce your message. Congratulations on ranking 6th in your level. The highest rankings can be found on the message boards.