The Official Writing Challenge
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08/20/15
Fascinating details about the Ark of the Covenant. The story really captured my attention from the beginning to the end.
08/26/15
Very interesting story...I wonder too what happened to the ark. You used some vivid verbs and descriptive adjectives that "showed the story" well. There was one quotation mark mistake that was a bit confusing.