The Official Writing Challenge
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I really enjoyed this sweet story. There are so many children who are in this situation. You made me stop and think about the ones who didn't have Mama praying for them, so I stopped and prayed for them too. This really touched my heart.
06/13/15
I really enjoyed this story, while at the same time felt sadness that he had to be alone. Good writing, it kept me in the story all the way.
06/18/15
Great narrative style in building it around a child's POV, yet keeping us with you all the way. Well done.