The Official Writing Challenge
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08/21/14
Beautiful job with the topic...well written this reflective introspective piece.

God bless~
08/22/14
This is very informative and full of truth.

You handled the topic well and gave me lots to think about.

Well done.
This is a powerful piece. You make some great points in this mini sermon. The only thing I might suggest is to tell it in the first person, sharing your decisions and how you came to them. That way the reader could really relate to it more. If you feel comfortable doing that, I'd encourage you to enter the testimony contest. You have such a passion in your words and I'd love to see your message reach as many people as possible--the testimony book may just be that venue. God bless and keep writing!