The Official Writing Challenge
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08/09/14
Great truths in your piece, along with a powerful message.

God bless~
08/10/14
Good job!

Some great thoughts on keeping our paths straight and attuned to God's voice.

Stayed on topic

Good Hook

I thought you were going to go off topic a little, but you reeled it back in.

Good job.
08/12/14
There are alot of great nuggets of truth in this devotional.

I enjoyed reading this and soaking in the word of God that you presented to the reader.

At times, we can relate also as we cry out to God, he comes to our aid, and scoops us up, and at times carries us.

Well done! Keep on writing!
That was very thought-provoking!

I have a very small drop of red ink. The first 3 sentences begin with "were". Perhaps some more active verbs might make it even better than it is?

I liked it. A good message with a lot of depth. I have read it over a couple times, and each time I see a new angle. I really appreciate pieces that can do that.
Powerful! I enjoyed the parallels immensely . . .
08/15/14
Congrats on your HC! Blessings to you!
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08/15/14
Congrats!

God bless~