The Official Writing Challenge
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06/13/14
Wow, great story. I have to admit though that you struck a chord. Nothing frightens me more than to be totally incapacitated. To not be able to move or talk and just lay there and listen to the madness that surrounds you. You totally sucked me into the story and I felt like I was lying there, and how frustrating that would be. Thanks awesome job!!!
06/13/14
I'm looking forward to THAT day AND the new body too. I loved the way you cleverly crafted this tale and the lesson it contains. Super work!
06/17/14
Wow! Powerful story with such a prolific message. WEll done. This was an excellent read.

God bless~
Powerful. My hubby was in a coma for almost two months. This was five years before I met him. He has grown into a true mensch, a man of God!

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06/19/14
Congratulations!

God Bless~
Congratulations on ranking 2nd in your level and 20th overall.