The Official Writing Challenge
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04/17/14
I teach Elementary History and I have one student who totally reminds me of Bella. Your characterization of the girl was accurate and entertaining. I would like have seen the story continue some more though. Perhaps you could have reached the same truths through your story-telling because that is something you do quite well. That said, there's powerful truths in your devotional.
04/19/14
You did an excellent job with the topic. I loved the segue that lead up to the wrap-up, which was so powerful and filled with truth. This was my favorite part:
Do you have questions and are searching for answers? Try Jesus, He cannot be googled, yet He is God’s answer to humanity. He is the Way, the Truth and the Life.

Brilliant!

God Bless~
I liked the Mother-Daughter scenario at the first so you could jump right into what you really wanted to talk about.

The flow in both parts was smooth as well as the transition to the main part of your article.

Good points, well taken, great concluding sentence.