The Official Writing Challenge
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I really hope this isn't a true it?

It was well-written and held my attention, however I was upset at the ending.

Over all, a nice job on topic and in content.

God bless~
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I liked how you told it from the cat's point of view, but then in the last few paragraphs, it changed - and confused me. This would be stronger if you kept in in one voice.
Keep writing.
Wow--what a twist on the ending there. I like how you used the title as the kitty's name. I have a curious tortie of my own and she's a real sweetheart, but constantly underfoot as well.

I was a little thrown-off at first if it was the cat narrating or an actual person, but apart from that, good job! Thanks for sharing.
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