The Official Writing Challenge
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Interesting perspective on this lesson. Nice.
Wonderful story. It looks like you have a great developing talent for children's stories and books—a big market! I had to assume the two hungry critters were mice, but was never certain. The message was good, and an important one. I had just a tiny bit of trouble with the analogy, I felt it was a little loose, but that's just me.
Keep it up—you are "dripping" with talent!