The Official Writing Challenge
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"Even our worst mistakes can be recycled into a victory when placed in God’s willing hands." Strongest line.
First half of the essay was a wonderful metaphor, well told. Though weak the transition to the Bible verse worked. However, the jump to the teen age girl story was out of place. There was a first person story in the first half, then a jump to a 3rd person story - if that story was important, weave into the context of the main theme. Overall, I really enjoyed the first part.
I agree with the other comment. There are kind of two stories here.
But I like the thought of getting past mistakes. Thank you.
I enjoyed this interesting and different piece. It's a delightful allegory.