The Official Writing Challenge
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Great poem, fun and with a lovely message. Well done.
Smiling. Here's a tissue.
Wonderful amusing piece! I could not write a poem if I had a gun to my head so I respect those who can!
Great job!
You never disappoint. These gems that just seem to come unbidden make you sparkle. God bless you. No sneeze required.
Delightful and charming, this piece is humorous, yet glorifies God as Creator. Very enjoyable read. It kept a good rhythm and rhyme all the way through. Bless You!
Matched couplets are always fun ... this poem especially so, thanks for the smile.
This is absolutely darling! My hat is off to you! Anyone that can write such a gem of a poem about sneezing, watery eyes and such should get an award. It takes real talent to take a topic such as this and write a poem that not only reads well but gives glory to our Lord. Thank you for this one kiddo, I liked it very much.
Cute poem. The rhythm was fun to read. Keep writing!
I liked some of the imagery in this poem - beautiful.
Simply wonderful! I was smiling the whole way through. I think one of my favorite parts was "See the buttercups? What a delight!
I'll have to take a pill tonight." Such a fun piece! Still smiling! :)
Congratulations on your Highly Commended. Of course you are always commendable in my book.
How fitting girl, a Birthday win! Happy Birthday Lynn, and I hope everyone goes to the Amazing April section to tell you so. This was such a wonderful poem. You are so gifted. Thanks for all of the sweetness you always show to everyone as well as that great humor of yours!
This is beautiful. You have a way of making it look easy to put those words in just the right order!Congratulations on ranking 4th in your level and 16 overall! Happy Birthday!