The Official Writing Challenge
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Your well written piece had a great message for all grandparents...we can be so enamored with the new love of grandchidren that we may have an unintentional slighting of our own children.Because this story was about personal feelings, wounds, and a direct word/reveation from the Lord, I think it might be more effective told in first person.Overall great work.