The Official Writing Challenge
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This is a well written piece which I found very uplifting. I'm not sure if it is on topic. Happy and funny are similar but not the same.

Your style is crisp and clear. I hope you keep writing.
Whether it was right on topic or not, I shore enjoyed it. I like the natural way you have depicted Jesus and the disciples, though "It is He" seemed a little stilted by comparison with the rest.
I loved the entry and always love stories about Jesus. Thank you. God bless~
The Bible story of the shore breakfast is one of my favorites about Jesus. His love and compassion show through so clearly in it. You did a nice job of retelling it.
I think this is an outstanding piece. I figured it was Jesus about halfway through and thought that it was a fresh and clever POV. And I definitely believed Jesus laughed!
I really loved this piece! I can imagine Jesus smiling and laughing in delight that the Father's "Plan" went off without a hitch( and Satan defeated in the process!)