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This is a fascinating sermonette. You make such good points and really make the reader think about the verses and our lifestyle choices. Sometimes junk food can be easier, but isn't that true for the other junk food that we fill our hearts with.

You may want to consider double-spacing between paragraphs to make it a bit easier to read.

I liked how you covered the topic and selected just the right verses to emphasis your point.
This is a neat little sermon, on topic and with points worthy of note.

There were one or two typo's and I think double spacing between paragraphs would help. Overall, a good job.
Your entry would be a bit more enjoyable with spacing between paragraphs. However, it is great biblical truth, and obviously has a lot of thought behind it. Many people have heart problems of both kinds. I love your title and the way you presented it.
Congratulations on ranking 19 overall!