The Official Writing Challenge
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I love how you've portrayed the "lost child" in Ben through the whole dream. Great character development. And I was so proud of him for coming to his senses at the end!
This is what came to mind as I finished reading this: love conquers all!

The power of dreams. What a difference it makes when someone pays attention.
Hooray. Great work.
I love stories with my son's name in it. Hehe. I really enjoyed this. The value of spending time with your children is too high. Thanks for sharing!