The Official Writing Challenge
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01/13/11
A very sweet story. And a nice end with a reminder to pray for those still lost. Thanks for sharing this!
01/15/11
an interesting tale of romance put to verse :-) i felt the blue moon was a bit of an afterthought, but maybe i am too much of a fuss pot!
01/15/11
Thanks for sharing your poem with us. I enjoyed reading it.
What a romantic poem, you showed what true love really is and how important to have Jesus be the center of that love. Great job.