The Official Writing Challenge
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I absolutely love this. You inspire me to take hold of my own truths like the MC did in this beautiful piece.

Tiny red ink in the first paragraph you used your instead of you're once.

However this is a fresh take on the topic and I enjoyed the unique idea of the Evil One being the one spreading rumors in your own head. Outstanding!!
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I like the title. Short story but full of encouraging truths about God's unconditional love and who I am in Him. Thank you - it uplifted my spirit.