The Official Writing Challenge
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Very unique and interesting take on the topic. I like the idea of God having a manuscript for each one of us.

I did question a couple things about your story-would she have told such an important secret without first consulting her parents and having them be present? And if her parents agreed to raise the baby wouldn't Sarah-Jean be her sister and not the neighbor?

But I suppose many of those details would be difficult to fit in with only 750 words. You did draw me right into the story. You did a good job handling the difficult topic of teen pregnancy. I liked how you brought the scriptures in to help Rosie make her decision.